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Why do you all look at me with disgust?
Why do you all look at me with disdain?
Why do you all look down upon me?
What have I done to deserve this?

Can`t you see
I`m breaking inside
Can`t you see
The sadness and sorrow in my eyes

The pain, the sadness
It all comes back
It`s all I ever felt

Can`t you see
I`m breaking inside
Can`t you see
The sadness and sorrow in my eyes

I want it to just go away
To just leave me alone!
I want it all to disappear!
But that`ll never happen

Can`t you see
I`m breaking inside
Can`t you see
The sadness and sorrow in my eyes

Just let me drown in my tears...
I was listening to the Piano Version of "Sadness and Sorrow" from Naruto.
I was kinda... i unno. This little piece kinda just... surfaced in my mind.
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DarkGeekMS Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fantastic
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rstoker2017 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Student General Artist
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ik how you feel. you just want to fall away, never be seen again. to never have to deal with anything creul. but you cant do anything that makes you happy without being sad. =,) its the painful truth.
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Introfox Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
I love it
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Mothhawk Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing.
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xXAllenXx-exile Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011
nice
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shuckerpea Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Sadness and Sorrow is a song that can manipulate someones emotions and twist them into a short depression. Well, it did to me. This piece is great, by the way.
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wolfie306 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2010  Student Digital Artist
i kind of feel that way at the moment, listening 2 music while reading (also goes good with My Immortal by Evanescence)
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mednight-2010 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2010
that's amazing ..
thanks a lot .
:)
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lloviendo-amor Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
its beautiful. you should write this as a song
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Kuzuki-Narutofan Featured By Owner May 5, 2010
Hey I wnned to ask you one thing ...Can I make song of your Poem cause it's beautyfull ...And my band will write on our cd that it was your idea..:)
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ZuKoBaBe Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2009
this is wonderfully written this is very good
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inkonito Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2008
Oh how I can understant what you write... That's what I feel now, for a while now...
I hope life is better for you, I hope you still can hope, it can be hard sometimes....
Sorry for my bad english, I'm french...
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Sbrendle Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2008
That track makes me sad too.. nice poem!
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Sora8850 Featured By Owner May 19, 2008
This is a beatiful poem, i love sad things because mainly i am sad ^^
*favs*
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bloomcandy Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
Wow this is good i kinda feel like that every week ^^;
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s4dNess Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2007   Interface Designer
awesome...
can i use it 4 one of my pictures please ?... =)
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MajinMike Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2007
Wonderful. I was writing my own lyrics as well. I'll post them shortly.
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minakonumnums Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2006
wow...very nicely done...it goes good while listening to the music *i'm listening to that version now*
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MANiNJA Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2006   Writer
=] Thank you.
It does go very nicely with the song, huh?
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minakonumnums Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2006
you're welcome ^^

beautifully :)
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